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Jen’s Writing Tip #5 It’s Fiction,But Is It Real?

The 10-year old hero of your story meets the villain. Before your hero jumps in a car, flies a plane or a space ship, make sure these elements make sense. Is your story set in a normal, human world where you wouldn’t see these events, or is it set in a new world – maybeContinueContinue reading “Jen’s Writing Tip #5 It’s Fiction,But Is It Real?”

Jen’s Writing Tip #4: Watch Passive Voice

Jason ate the cookie.The cookie was eaten by Jason.Which sentence above do you find more interesting to read? Did one of them provide a better picture in your head of what was going on? Both sentences tell us about Jason eating a cookie, but the first one was more clear and you can easily visualizeContinueContinue reading “Jen’s Writing Tip #4: Watch Passive Voice”